Dark Star: The Return
Posted 25 May 2008 - 12:20 PM
A little more work on the spelling though, it's Illegal not Illeagle.
Did I sign up for this? *goes to check sign-up topic*
EDIT: Apparently not, so I did.
Edited by Fortyk, 25 May 2008 - 12:29 PM.
Posted 25 May 2008 - 12:48 PM
Posted 25 May 2008 - 12:52 PM
Takes regular visits to sweater town.
Posted 25 May 2008 - 03:08 PM
Good start, BBJ. The effects might need a little work, and some places could do with a bit of onomatopoeia (Boom, bang, crash, e.t.c) and some pictoral elaboration (More pics so we can see what's going on, i.e. the grenade, if there was one, and a front on pic of the gun being shot/the guy being hit, instead of just "You shot him") but i'm hardly in a position to complain. I'll be waiting for the first plot cookie to see what happens. I LOVE PLOT COOKIES!!!
Posted 25 May 2008 - 11:42 PM
This is part 1: Issue 1, part 2 will focus on Braskir and other mercs, expets 3 parts per chapter on average.
Posted 28 May 2008 - 10:08 AM
Posted 28 May 2008 - 10:11 AM
What?! Why? Just redo the first chapter the way you want to. Don't cancel the comic altogether.
Posted 28 May 2008 - 10:35 AM
Posted 28 May 2008 - 08:30 PM
So does CvV, but I still do it. Well, saying that, I haven't updated in a while...
Basically, just make it shorter, like 5 issues or something.
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