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#1 ManyRedLlamas

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Posted 18 July 2012 - 01:04 AM

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#2 Rune Walsh

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Posted 18 July 2012 - 01:45 AM

There's not really enough meat for me to give a proper critique. Your effects are decent, but I've no idea what's actually going on. I think I'll keep an eye on this.

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#3 cheeso194

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Posted 18 July 2012 - 04:13 AM

I'm with Rune Walsh here, I really have no idea what happened here. I do like the way it looks, with the different factions, but I think some story before you start throwing characters and plot devices at us would help.

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#4 ManyRedLlamas

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Posted 19 July 2012 - 03:28 AM

More will be explained in the next comic.
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#5 Spider-Man

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Posted 23 July 2012 - 06:37 AM

Then give us the next comic!





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