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#1 cheeso194

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Posted 28 April 2012 - 04:39 PM

So I'm trying something new here. I have lots of ideas for comics, but I never know which ones will work well or if they will be long enough to really fill up a topic on their own. So, what I'm doing here is doing some one-off episodes and some pilots for various ideas. If you particularly like any of them, let me know! I might give them a topic on their own keep making them. Think of this as an anthology series or sketch show. If you have any ideas for episodes, go ahead and suggest. This topic is really just a testing field.
This ones a gritty vigilante drama, I don't really have a name yet. Suggestions?
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Edited by cheeso194, 05 October 2013 - 12:00 AM.

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Cheeso's One Offs and Pilots

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#2 Neyo Wargear

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Posted 28 April 2012 - 07:39 PM

You sir is a twisted little freak but, anyway I like it. Nothing like a torture scene.

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#3 Jociva Flcol

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Posted 29 April 2012 - 12:43 AM

I like this idea so much that I might do something of my own similar to it.

This one was good. My only gripes are that there should have been a lot, I mean a LOT of screaming for all the cutting he was doing. And the pics were a tad on the small side, but other than that, I did enjoy this. I'd enjoy to see a short series based off this guy, but even this one off is enjoyable. Well done, sir.

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#4 Fortiest of all K's

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Posted 29 April 2012 - 02:30 AM

Rorscach? :P

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Posted 29 April 2012 - 07:17 AM

Rorscach? :P


Same Thought, Exactly...At First I thought it was Watchmen Parody...This looks good, but if I start Seeing things that look like naked Blue Men...I am really Interested...

#6 Jociva Flcol

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Posted 29 April 2012 - 10:24 AM

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Turtle, that last bit just sounded entirely wrong. :P

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#7 Oufy

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Posted 01 May 2012 - 01:59 AM

but if I start Seeing things that look like naked Blue Men...I am really Interested...

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#8 cheeso194

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Posted 19 May 2012 - 07:50 PM

I appreciate all the feedback, guys. I did just realized how much that vigilante was like Rorshach. Heh. If I bring him back, I'll definitely make some significant changes.
Anyway, heres another. This one came about from reading Waiting to Respawn.

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Edited by cheeso194, 05 October 2013 - 12:04 AM.

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http://forums.saber-...?showtopic=9064


#9 Oufy

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Posted 19 May 2012 - 08:05 PM

Nice comic, dude! Do you take requests? If you do, can you PM me?

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#10 Fortiest of all K's

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Posted 19 May 2012 - 11:46 PM

Omg I love it. :3

'Fire ze main cannonz!'

'Have you ever heard of... the Leeroy maneuver?'

'Nope nope nope noooooope.'

I love your sets as well, the Tank also looks very awesome. :)

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Posted 20 May 2012 - 07:09 AM

:lol: please keep going with the military game comic, it's hilarious!

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Posted 21 May 2012 - 11:40 AM

I really like the brickbuilt effects you've got going on in that vidya game comic, Cheeso. I'm a sucker for bricky effects, and you pulled those explosions off nicely. And like Fortyk said, the tank is sweet - nice and cartoony, but still definitely a tank. Keep up the awesome work!

I just migh drink it to keep the fear of SEEING THE PAT THAT SHOULD BE COVERED BY NAME OMG SO MUCH BLOOD

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#13 Jociva Flcol

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Posted 22 May 2012 - 08:11 AM

I liked it! I wanna see, like, a mob comic next. :P

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Posted 23 May 2012 - 01:39 AM


I liked it! I wanna see, like, a mob comic next. :P

Guess whos wish just got fulfilled? I'll give you a hint: his name rhymes with Flociva Jlcol.

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Edited by cheeso194, 05 October 2013 - 12:06 AM.

I DO NEAT THINGS WITH COMICS

Cheeso's One Offs and Pilots

http://forums.saber-...?showtopic=9064


#15 Jlblue

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Posted 23 May 2012 - 01:56 AM

Geez, you've got quite the knack for adapting to different styles, I must say. All I can say is keep up the great work... And I sure hope a network picks up one of these pilots so I can watch the full series. :D

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#16 Jociva Flcol

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Posted 25 May 2012 - 10:01 AM

Mob one was amazing! :D Couldn't have wished for a better scene than a shootup either. That was great! :D

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Posted 25 May 2012 - 11:19 AM

Wow, these are really good! :D I'd have to say the Gaming WWII one is my favorite, the jokes were hilarious and the brick effects were wonderfully done. Keep up the awesome work! :D

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Posted 28 May 2012 - 09:51 AM

Ok, Where's the SitCom that has SSLF Characters in it...
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#19 Oufy

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Posted 29 May 2012 - 11:01 PM

Hey Cheeso! How the Sword of Legend comic is going? :)

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#20 cheeso194

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Posted 30 May 2012 - 12:21 AM

Hey Cheeso! How the Sword of Legend comic is going? :)

Pretty well, I'm still creating the sets and characters right now. I need to aquire some cannons and whip up the Demon, but I'll have it up soon.

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