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#261 Darkranger The Spirit Wolf

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Posted 13 May 2010 - 12:14 PM

OOH OOH! I KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! Well, I have a theory. Jenkins will turn before he sets off the bomb.

There is no such thing as normal. Especially here.

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#262 El Taco

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Posted 13 May 2010 - 12:20 PM

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My god JL, just finish it!

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#263 Rune Walsh

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Posted 13 May 2010 - 12:48 PM

Woah, I just, really cried right there.

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#264 Jociva Flcol

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Posted 13 May 2010 - 12:48 PM

Very good, highyl dramatic, and very suspensefuly awesome.

Can't wait to see what happens in the end. :)

#265 Blade

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Posted 13 May 2010 - 05:10 PM

I was surprised he didn't turn then and there and try to devour her! You're getting soft, Jl!

#266 Jlblue

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Posted 15 May 2010 - 03:18 AM

You ready?

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#267 Rune Walsh

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Posted 15 May 2010 - 03:24 AM

Huzzah and hurrah! Another epic work completed! Bravo, Sir Blue, bravo!

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#268 Darknoon

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Posted 15 May 2010 - 04:34 AM

A bit of an abrupt end, idk why so many people rushed it. Just seemed a bit anti-climatic, resolving that huge issue with just one explosion and only two more lives lost. :unsure:
Can't wait for what you turn out next. Grats, I enjoyed Smileville.
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#269 El Taco

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Posted 15 May 2010 - 04:52 AM

...hmmm...

Time for Black Thursday!

I liked how you ended it with some comedy. This comic was...interesting.

Don't make the gap between this and Black Thursday too big. Last time, nothing really happened on this board.

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#270 Hawk

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Posted 15 May 2010 - 05:12 AM

Even if I'm no longer interested in Legos, I'll always come back and read you latest works. There always awesome and this is no exception, great job JL. ;)

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#271 Kenny

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Posted 15 May 2010 - 06:23 AM

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Excellent tale, Jeff.

#272 Grombrindal

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Posted 15 May 2010 - 08:23 AM

Oh no. You didn't. You didn't do that.

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The virus is spread orally, you fool! And you KISSED one of the INFECTED! Guess it's all going to happen again, then -_-. Get ready for another creepy zombie comic, guys :P.

But seriously, well done. Although in my opinion this wasn't as good as some of your other works, it still should rate an honourable mention in your list of comics :).

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#273 Jociva Flcol

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Posted 15 May 2010 - 08:31 AM

Grom. Honorable mention? I think that's about low of a rating...

This was great, I really loved Steve's speech at the end. Also, can we ever see what their faces were supposed to look like if they weren't creepy smiling idiots? Please? :)

I really enjoyed this. T'was good to the last drop. ;)

#274 sillverwolfone

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Posted 15 May 2010 - 11:46 PM

great work as usual jl ,not quite as good as your other work, but still pretty good for something (from what you said) you had no interest in.
well it's not really a wolf but I guess it'll work

#275 Jlblue

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Posted 16 May 2010 - 12:19 AM

I perfectly understand the mixed reaction. My plan was to intentionally avoid comparisons with my other stuff by not trying to make it as good, as insane as it sounds. Basically, I wasn't trying to out do Est. '62 because Est. '62 was epic and I figured I couldn't make it live up to it. That, along with fluctuating interest made for it being rather uneven, I suppose. I'm not sure when Black Thursday will begin (I'd like to say it will start this Thursday or something, for awesomeness' sake, but I'll be realistic and say it will probably be longer). I'll try to give you guys something to tide you over, but I'm not sure what yet.

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#276 Jociva Flcol

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Posted 18 May 2010 - 03:40 AM

Maybe you could show us what the characters of Smileville would look like with regular faces. :P

#277 Jlblue

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Posted 18 May 2010 - 05:03 AM

Why on earth do people care about what the characters look liked beforehand? More importantly, why do people seem to be under the impression that I've thought about this at all? ^_^

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#278 Jociva Flcol

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Posted 18 May 2010 - 12:58 PM

Becaus I figured a good comic maker and story writer such as yourself would think up all these things beforehand. :P

#279 Jlblue

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Posted 20 May 2010 - 10:23 AM

Not that I'm trying to sway you or anything, but I would probably be more likely to work and get Black Thursday underway if I knew my comics were loved. You could, in theory, show me that you love them by nominating this one for some kind of... Oh what are they called... That award for comics on these forums. :P

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#280 Grombrindal

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Posted 20 May 2010 - 11:15 AM

But that award is for GOOD comics, JL :P.

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