*Wanders into thread*
*Sees new comic*
"What? A forum comic? Oh geez. And on MocPages? Oh god! Ah well, better check it out anyway..."
*Cries tears of joy*
good for a first attempt at a comic. Outstanding. Seriously. I'm not kidding. It's just...wow
Where to begin? Picture quality, first off, is absolutely fantastic. Superb, in fact. Better than almost every comic I've seen on here. The concept, though a little bland, worked much better than I expected. The thing that struck me the most, though, was the scene with Hitler. The decals, set design, reconstruction of the shots, etc...they were 100% accurate. Well played.
Another part I liked was the Leeroy Jenkins scene. Particularly because the knights looked so medieval
. The humour, though I'm not a fan of memes, was good all-round. As I finished reading it, and began to post here, I noticed what you said in the opening post:
Hi guys. This is a comic I made about a forum that I used to go to before it died. The story that I made up for this comic is fictional, but the members of the forum depicted used are real and in some cases are fairly accurate representations of how they acted in the forum (in my opinion
). Since this is one of my first attempts at making an actual long comic, some things like camera angles, editing, building, etc. are pretty amateur and crude. I hope that those skills will get better with more experience and time.
And I almost died. Again. The camera angles were great, as was the editing and building. Although it's not first-rate "pro" building, for a comic, it's beyond what many members can achieve - it's not about the set, but what you do
with it (see JLBlue's comics - all HE used was a baseplate and a bunch of grey bricks
). The effects were fine, in my opinion. So just as I was about to hit the post button with a 5/5 rating, I saw this:
Next issue will be up next Friday.
Which guarantees there will not be more by next Friday
. Simply because the laws of the universe will stack against you and prevent it from happening. It's fact - if a comic maker announces something will be up at such-and-such a time, it won't happen
. Just be warned - you'll probably get a bunch of people flooding here asking for "MOAR!"
So good luck anyway, and an excellent first start.