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#1 Doctor

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Posted 30 November 2008 - 12:00 AM




Characters: (from left to right) Gunner,Shadow,Nova,Commander Radien, Havoc,Patch,Deadeye, and the guy in the back is rusty

ARC Trooper Havoc and Nova, Scout Trooper: Shadow, Commander: Radien, Clone Troopers: Deadeye (sniper), Gunner (heavy weapons), and Patch (medic), Rusty(mechanic/pilot).

#2 Clueless_Hero

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Posted 30 November 2008 - 05:24 AM

Thanks for putting ol' Rusty in the very back, lol. More comic please.
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Posted 30 November 2008 - 09:33 AM

First issue.



The Planet Skaro in the outer rim, an old fortress has become a Separatist base. One of the Clones scouts has seen the Arrival of the fiendish Droid General General Grievous.


Shadow: Greyhound 42 to Greyhound Leader do you read me over.


Commander Radien: Greyhound leader here, report Greyhound 42.
Shadow: General Grievous has arrived, everything is ready for the attack.
Commander Radien: Roger that Greyhound 42 fall back to Alpha Base.
Shadow: Understood Shadow out.


Droid Commander: General, were picking up a transmission. Its on a different frequency then are own.
General Grievous: So the Republic has found us, trace that transmission.
Droid Commander: Roger Roger


Plo Koon:-so I cut of his-
CR: General Koon, Grievous has arrived at the fortress everything is ready.


Plo Koon: What of General Kenobi? Where is his fleet?
CR: They were delayed near Mondas sir.


Plo Koon: Looks like we'll have to go threw with the plan on our own, ready the Gunships for ground assault.
CR: Yes sir.

Sorry for the short no action comic, my camera was low on battry.

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Posted 30 November 2008 - 10:09 AM

not bad for the start. i like that you took all of my sudjestions for names. big smiley biggrin.gif
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Posted 02 December 2008 - 01:20 AM

this looks good.
keep it up.
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#6 Rune Walsh

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Posted 02 December 2008 - 01:42 AM

What? No Daleks? Back on topic: It was pretty good, I really didn't like your lack of speech bubbles, but I will deal with it.

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Posted 02 December 2008 - 08:49 AM

QUOTE (Rune Walsh @ Dec 2 2008, 07:47 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
What? No Daleks? Back on topic: It was pretty good, I really didn't like your lack of speech bubbles, but I will deal with it.

same here. I would've been better with speech bubbles but really, theres no room on the pictures for it.

There is no such thing as normal. Especially here.

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Posted 02 December 2008 - 10:10 AM


CR: General, the Recon squad is assembled,and the Gunship is almost ready.
Plo Koon: Good alert Alpha Base to our arrival and tell sergeant Strike to wait for our signal before landing.


CR: Yes General
Plo Koon: Looks like the Gunship is almost ready lets get the troops on board.


Patch: Hey Gunner, watcha think of the new pilot?
Gunner: I don't know, certainly took his sweet time tweaking up the Gunship.
Patch: I know, does he think the whole war will wait for him.


Rusty: You know I can hear you mynocks right?


Rusty: You two better watch your mouths, I'm the only guy who can get you down on the planet without getting slagged.


Havoc: Can't wait, can't remember the las time I was on the first burn of an invasion.
Nova: I just can't wait to roast some clankers with this thing.


FOOM
Nova: Ha Ha, burn suckers burn!!!!
Havoc: Nova by name, Nova by nature Huh.


CR: OI! You two get your sun bonnets on this transport before it leaves without you!


Nova: First burn baby!
Havoc: Can't wait!

#9 Rune Walsh

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Posted 02 December 2008 - 10:37 PM

QUOTE (Darkranger The Spirit Wolf @ Dec 2 2008, 05:54 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
same here. I would've been better with speech bubbles but really, theres no room on the pictures for it.


Yes well, they being clones, it is [ahem] bloody difficult to tell them apart.

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Posted 06 December 2008 - 07:35 AM


Meanwhile at Alpha-base, Shadow has returned from scouting and now is waiting for the Recon squad.


Deadeye: Cool your thrusters Shadow.
Shadow: I can't, the longer we wait the bigger the chance Grievous could leave, we have to catch him.


Deadeye: True but-
Computer: Warning multiple hostels approaching from the West.


Droid Commander: There's the base go see if you can get those doors open.
Droid Sergeant: Roger Roger


Shadow: Go go go go
Deadeye: I'll get to higher ground


Droid Sergeant: The doors locked sir.


Droid Commander: Is it still locked?
Droid Sergeant: No sir.


A droid's head is sniped off
Droid Commander: What the-


The Droid Commander gets his head sniped off.


Shadow grabs the droid sergeant and uses him to block the other droid's shots then Shadow shoots the remaining droid.


Shadow: Firefek!!!!
Shadow jumps out of the way of the Spider Droids blast.


The Spider Droid is suddenly destroyed
Shadow: What the-


Commander Radien: Next time don't start the party without us.

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Posted 07 December 2008 - 05:45 AM

nice comic but it needs some explosin

Edited by sillverwolfone, 07 December 2008 - 05:46 AM.

well it's not really a wolf but I guess it'll work

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Posted 08 December 2008 - 07:28 PM

Comic's nicely started. But a few laser bolts and effects would be nice.
You don't need anything fancy, MS Paint should get the message through.
Keep up the good work.
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#13 Just...The Doctor

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Posted 15 December 2008 - 01:45 PM

Very nice! Although I do agree: needs some effects and speech bubbles would be good. Other than that, splendid. The future is looking bright for this comic! And Skaro?? Ok, that means I get Raxacoricofallapatorius in my comic!! Only huge Doctor Who fans would know what that is wink.gif
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#14 Rune Walsh

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Posted 16 December 2008 - 01:57 AM

Home Planet of the family Slitheen, and twin planet of Klom.
Yeah, the lack of explosions bugged me also, and does using a droid as a.. Human?shield work?

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Posted 16 December 2008 - 07:55 AM

Okay, I can't afford to buy any affects for my computer so I'm going to try out some Lego Blaster affects.

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Posted 12 January 2009 - 05:42 AM

Paint and Paint.net are both free editers and not bad for beginers. Also if you shrink them down in ms paint by 30% will save on loading as they come up massive first for me.

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Posted 12 January 2009 - 05:54 AM

Not a bad comic. I like the humor, but as several have said, effects n speech bubbles would be great. "Then I cut off his-". lol. Keep goin.

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Posted 28 March 2009 - 11:13 PM

Nice comic 'cept for reasons pretty much already stated e.g. lack of speech bubbles. Just one question why Stalingrad are droids the Russians or something(assuming Stalingrad is separatist controlled) again nice comic
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#19 Darkranger The Spirit Wolf

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Posted 29 March 2009 - 11:47 PM

QUOTE (Grath @ Mar 29 2009, 06:18 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Nice comic 'cept for reasons pretty much already stated e.g. lack of speech bubbles. Just one question why Stalingrad are droids the Russians or something(assuming Stalingrad is separatist controlled) again nice comic


You just..... Please don't bump old topics....

There is no such thing as normal. Especially here.

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Posted 01 April 2009 - 08:09 AM

wow... Sorry been gone for a long time did not realize this was that old.ohmy.gif
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