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#1 Rapier-Myst

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Posted 11 October 2008 - 04:46 PM




















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#2 Fortiest of all K's

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Posted 11 October 2008 - 05:00 PM

OOH, This looks good! Maybe work on the backdrop, though. That's the only downside so far. biggrin.gif

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#3 Grombrindal

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Posted 11 October 2008 - 07:07 PM

Looks pretty good, overall. The background's a bit funky - try using Paint.Net if you don't already. If you DO, turn the tolerance down a bit wink.gif. The only other issue I have is that some of the clothing doesn't seem to match the era (i.e. clone trooper and Union soldier torsos).
Keep up the good work. I'll be watching.

I just migh drink it to keep the fear of SEEING THE PAT THAT SHOULD BE COVERED BY NAME OMG SO MUCH BLOOD

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#4 The Magic Tuba Pixie

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Posted 12 October 2008 - 12:44 AM

Yay Advontur.

Don't try so hard on the backgrounds. They do look kinda funky, as Grom and Forty said.

When introducing the characters, why did only Felix Holia have his name above his head? It was helpful when trying to determine who he was, but not as helpful with everyone else's.

Keep this up. Me likes.

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#5 Hawk

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Posted 12 October 2008 - 02:58 AM



What is wrong with this guy? He has blond hair, a white beard, and a black mustache. WTF!?!

Good stuff so far, nice work on the effects. smile.gif

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#6 Lightning Bolt

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Posted 12 October 2008 - 03:16 AM

The backgrounds and figures could use a little work (like I noticed that first guy who signed up had a stormtrooper torso and all that), but it's good for a start I like the story so far, and the comic looks promising, so keep working at it. I look forward to see how it goes. wink.gif

#7 Rapier-Myst

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Posted 12 October 2008 - 02:11 PM

QUOTE (Grombrindal @ Oct 12 2008, 08:12 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Looks pretty good, overall. The background's a bit funky - try using Paint.Net if you don't already. If you DO, turn the tolerance down a bit wink.gif. The only other issue I have is that some of the clothing doesn't seem to match the era (i.e. clone trooper and Union soldier torsos).
Keep up the good work. I'll be watching.


Heh, I use photoshop. Thats my first attempt at back drops. I'll improve.
I just needed torsos, noone afterwards is going to keep that stuff.

QUOTE (The Magic Tuba Pixie @ Oct 13 2008, 01:49 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Yay Advontur.

Don't try so hard on the backgrounds. They do look kinda funky, as Grom and Forty said.

When introducing the characters, why did only Felix Holia have his name above his head? It was helpful when trying to determine who he was, but not as helpful with everyone else's.

Keep this up. Me likes.


Felix Holia is not a sign-up. Hence the reason I only put his name. The sign-up guys, well, you'll have to ask them about their names. To me, Felix here is more important than them due to it being my guy. (Trivia: He is also in the actual Advontur series)

QUOTE (Hawk @ Oct 13 2008, 04:03 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>


What is wrong with this guy? He has blond hair, a white beard, and a black mustache. WTF!?!

Good stuff so far, nice work on the effects. smile.gif


He went to a saloon. And little did he know that the barber was colour blind.

QUOTE (BoltenElite0 @ Oct 13 2008, 04:21 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
The backgrounds and figures could use a little work (like I noticed that first guy who signed up had a stormtrooper torso and all that), but it's good for a start I like the story so far, and the comic looks promising, so keep working at it. I look forward to see how it goes. wink.gif


Meh, just wait for the next issue.

#8 Muffinmanifestation

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Posted 13 October 2008 - 07:05 AM

QUOTE (Rapier-Myst @ Oct 12 2008, 11:16 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
He went to a saloon. And little did he know that the barber was colour blind.


*Facepalm*

Maybe a little more intro into the actual time/place they're in, but other than that, it looks like Michael Jackson grew a beard and is taking young soldiers off to battle (I'll leave this to the imagination).

#9 Rapier-Myst

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#10 Grombrindal

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Posted 25 October 2008 - 08:26 AM

That part was very well done, Myst. Once again, the backgrounds are a bit off, eating Lego bricks (tongue.gif), but I reckon if you film against a solid white/green/blue (green's probably the best, or blue) backdrop, it'll improve the pics massively (also, try turning down the tolerance level on the magic toolbrush - it'll help a lot). Couple of overlookable grammatical mistakes, a well-thought-out plot twist, some decent humour, and you've got an above-average comic. Well done wink.gif.

I just migh drink it to keep the fear of SEEING THE PAT THAT SHOULD BE COVERED BY NAME OMG SO MUCH BLOOD

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#11 Fortiest of all K's

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Posted 25 October 2008 - 09:04 AM

...Well, that was unexpected! The blonde, white-haired mustachioed guy was in fact a chick! Bet nobody saw that one coming...

Anywho, Nice part.

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#12 †David Spike†

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Posted 27 October 2008 - 10:41 AM

Well, I saw some grammar issues (there=they're) but I liked it.
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#13 Darkranger The Spirit Wolf

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Posted 27 October 2008 - 10:53 AM

well its nice but its the backgrounds. I really wouldn't care if there werent any. But I guess people are different.

well its nice but its the backgrounds. I really wouldn't care if there werent any. But I guess people are different.

There is no such thing as normal. Especially here.

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Posted 27 October 2008 - 01:50 PM

Why the double post?

Why the double post?


When's the next one gonna be posted?

Edited by †David Spike†, 27 October 2008 - 01:51 PM.

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#15 Blade Boa

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Posted 30 October 2008 - 01:23 PM

Good comic so far.
When is the next one going to be posted?

#16 Rapier-Myst

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Posted 07 March 2009 - 08:52 AM

I have returned! And with me comes a comic that will be completed, no matter how long it takes!
































Post for next Comic stuff, or could some one copy the img urls below into their post?
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#17 The Magic Tuba Pixie

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Posted 07 March 2009 - 09:05 AM

Cripes, kid. You update like I do.

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Personally, I would have stopped it here, but whatever.



This is kinda unecessary.

Oh, well.
I'm glad you're back!
My main gripes are the picture quality in the beginning. At least you got it fixed, I guess.

And you have no idea how tempted I was to put these in the wrong order. biggrin.gif
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#18 Jlblue

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Posted 07 March 2009 - 09:20 AM

Hmm... interesting. First two parts, I was tempted to just stop. But the third's picture quality and character design is much better in its revamped form. I'll be watching this... like a hawk. ph34r.gif Or a ninja. They watch things well too.

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#19 Crispy

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Posted 11 March 2009 - 09:46 AM

QUOTE (Jlblue @ Mar 7 2009, 07:25 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
The third's picture quality and character design is much better in its revamped form. I'll be watching this... like a hawk. ph34r.gif Or a ninja. They watch things well too.

Too right mate. I agree completely.

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#20 Rapier-Myst

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Posted 18 May 2009 - 05:22 PM

Volia, like a Connex train my comic appears, late as usual!

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I don't think anyone would get the connection between MTP and Bandi, but then again, I'm the one with the script and history of Advontur. MTP, have fun trying to guess the connection.




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