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#1 Blade Boa

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Posted 03 August 2008 - 08:06 AM

This is a new comic I'm making, enjoy the first part!


















Post away so I can post the next part!

Edited by Blade Boa, 03 August 2008 - 08:09 AM.


#2 Hawk

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Posted 03 August 2008 - 10:51 AM

It was pretty good so far, keep it up. smile.gif

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#3 Blade Boa

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Posted 03 August 2008 - 01:05 PM

REMADE







Edited by Blade Boa, 25 August 2008 - 01:02 PM.


#4 Hawk

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Posted 03 August 2008 - 01:10 PM

You need to put [/img] after each image. smile.gif

Edit: You need to keep the [img] before the images too.

Edited by Hawk, 04 August 2008 - 01:30 AM.

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#5 Grombrindal

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Posted 03 August 2008 - 06:07 PM

To make the images deeplinked, you need to add coding tags (i.e. ) wink.gif.
Anyways, it's pretty good so far. Reminds me a little of the S-Team tongue.gif.

I just migh drink it to keep the fear of SEEING THE PAT THAT SHOULD BE COVERED BY NAME OMG SO MUCH BLOOD

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#6 Blade Boa

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Posted 06 August 2008 - 01:20 PM

heres part2




















can more people replie

Edited by Blade Boa, 07 August 2008 - 05:26 AM.


#7 Crazyllama77

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Posted 08 August 2008 - 02:11 AM

Your wish is mah Procrastinated reply biggrin.gif

#8 Hawk

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Posted 08 August 2008 - 05:30 AM

Its still good, but I can't help but feel you need a bit less speed. The blasting through the wall part needed an explosion, and for some reason int he last picture the bounty hunter just drops his gun. Also, you need capitalization for those sentences.

Don't get me wrong, its still a nice beginning, just take a bit more time making each part. biggrin.gif

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#9 Void Viper

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Posted 08 August 2008 - 02:06 PM

After I helped you with the first one, I thought you would be okay without me. I was wrong. Learn to spell.
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#10 Blade Boa

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Posted 10 August 2008 - 09:30 AM

i'll just remake part2 it make take awhile

Edited by Blade Boa, 10 August 2008 - 10:24 AM.


#11 FableSamurai

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Posted 10 August 2008 - 12:55 PM

It looks like it could be interesting, but it seems childish.
"how shoots like crazy when you burn" that doesnt make sense.
"you just blasted through my wall!" it looks more like he walked in through the door....and that doesnt seem like something someone would really say. Like Hawk said, caps are needed, and most of the dialogue needs work.

This sounds good to have some kicks. I'm just gonna go on, and act retarted or something. Maybe shout quotes from the Communist Manifesto. Angrily.

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#12 Void Viper

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Posted 11 August 2008 - 06:18 AM

He's only 10
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#13 FableSamurai

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Posted 11 August 2008 - 06:21 AM

QUOTE (Void Viper @ Aug 9 2008, 12:11 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
After I helped you with the first one, I thought you would be okay without me. I was wrong. Learn to spell.

you didnt seem to care then, i posted honest truth, whats wrong with that.

This sounds good to have some kicks. I'm just gonna go on, and act retarted or something. Maybe shout quotes from the Communist Manifesto. Angrily.

Abandon your social life, and engage in Crackdown, GTA IV, Saints Row and Mass Effect 'till you beat them. BTW, don't turn it off while beating these games. I'm sure it will catch fire by then.


#14 Void Viper

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Posted 11 August 2008 - 11:07 AM

Argh. the pictures are down.
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#15 Blade Boa

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Posted 13 August 2008 - 08:15 AM

Sorry everone, but there's been some screw-ups so the remake won't be done for a while.

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Posted 16 August 2008 - 03:00 PM

i cant read part two of one its all xs in boxs

#17 Blade Boa

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Posted 18 August 2008 - 05:54 AM

it does not matter anymore because i'm remaking it

#18 Blade Boa

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Posted 25 August 2008 - 01:03 PM

remade the second comic, third one done.













Edited by Blade Boa, 12 September 2008 - 11:28 AM.


#19 Void Viper

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Posted 14 September 2008 - 12:59 PM

Does someone need postage?
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#20 Blade Boa

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Posted 16 September 2008 - 10:59 AM

#4!
Pictures may be dark because I forgot to put flash on.











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