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#1 Nirdian

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Posted 08 April 2008 - 10:54 PM

Allright here's my comic.
I'm having trouble with paint so the text is a bit small, but I liked it.
ANYWAY enjoy!: Dragon about Knights

Gimme a rate if you like it plz.
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#2 Grath

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Posted 08 April 2008 - 11:05 PM

It was good for your first comic, and a little funny especially the "they carry to much indigestible crap" but still not very good but keep trying.
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#3 137

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Posted 08 April 2008 - 11:58 PM

It's cool not so much a comic as a joke but whatever please make some more!

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#4 Nirdian

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Posted 09 April 2008 - 01:47 AM

QUOTE (137 @ Apr 8 2008, 02:01 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
It's cool not so much a comic as a joke but whatever please make some more!


I'll make some more. could be a while though.
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#5 -Master M-

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Posted 09 April 2008 - 04:23 AM

I guess the joke was alright, but other than that, it wasn`t really a "comic".Looks like you used your dragon and some grey plates and took a series of pictures, followed by captions and called it a "comic".Otherwise, you should keep making comics.Try doing speech bubbles.
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#6 Hawk

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Posted 09 April 2008 - 04:48 AM

Ah, I love the little dragon having a corpse hairball. smile.gif

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#7 Sir_Muffonious

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Posted 09 April 2008 - 05:10 AM

The best picture was the dragon looking at all the crap he poo'd out at the end. smile.gif The pictures were blurry, and it didn't take much to do, I'm sure. But anyway, it was a good first try. Keep working at it, and you might get better.

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#8 Grath

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Posted 09 April 2008 - 05:11 AM

QUOTE (Hawk @ Apr 8 2008, 02:51 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Ah, I love the little dragon having a corpse hairball. smile.gif

Hawk I think you might be wrong about it being a hairball Just think which end it was at.
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#9 Darth Revan

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Posted 09 April 2008 - 05:22 AM

Well there wasn't much to it, and some of the pics where blurry. But hey its a good first try at making your own comic. wink.gif

#10 NOT ME

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Posted 09 April 2008 - 05:28 AM

Verry good for a first comic, I am impressed. Keep working on it though, there are a few things you could improve...

#11 Hawk

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Posted 09 April 2008 - 05:51 AM

QUOTE (Grath @ Apr 8 2008, 08:14 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Hawk I think you might be wrong about it being a hairball Just think which end it was at.

Ler Gasp, god, maximum of PG ratings people, no one wants to see that! sad.gif

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#12 The Magic Tuba Pixie

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Posted 09 April 2008 - 07:14 AM

The comic was actually halfway decent. I've seen worse, and I've seen better. In the future, I would suggest using a different software (if you have it) and using more characters, although you managed to pull off the dragon monologue pretty well. Compliling all the panels in one document allows for easier deeplinking, too. I'd post my comics, but Brickshelf isn't letting me right now... crying.gif

By the way, how did you access you Brickshelf page? I though the site was messing up...I can't even find myself on public searches...hmm...time to keep searching!

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#13 Strider

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Posted 09 April 2008 - 09:13 AM

I like it for a first comic but try to add bubbles. It was a Joke, however.......
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#14 Nirdian

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Posted 09 April 2008 - 10:43 PM

Thank you guys.
I've heard some complaints though
and here are the reasons
1 I cant use speech bubbles in paint
2 I used my mothers crappy camera
3 I dont hav any other program than paint
4 It's my first so I'll probably improve

Thanks a lot guys. Really smile.gif
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#15 Hurki-Wan KenobLee

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Posted 10 April 2008 - 12:58 AM

It's good for a first, I'll give you that, but here's some pointers:

  1. You need to resize the images, and Post them ON THE FORUM.
  2. You need word bubbles, So just snag one from the internet, copy paste it, and then warp it to fit.
  3. SCENES. You must put TONS of effort into your scenes.
  4. Cut movements, and consolidate lengthy conversations.
When I Re-Re post my old comics, you'll see what I meant.

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#16 The Indispensable Fred Red

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Posted 10 April 2008 - 10:29 AM

Um, that was a very disturbing joke. It was an OK first try. Just keep trying, and you'll get better.
Cheerio, time to get things into play. Let's get this rollin', laddie. I am behooved to have this here.
Keep it fresh.

#17 black wolf

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Posted 17 April 2008 - 03:22 AM

Its okay for a start ,but i like it.

#18 Rogue-Brigade

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Posted 17 April 2008 - 05:07 AM

A very funny joke, I'll say, but it wasn't that long. Add to it a little and it will be pretty good. 2.5/5 as is.

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