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#1 *307*

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Posted 23 June 2008 - 12:37 AM

This is a comic that takes place in my sci-fi world. Enjoy!

















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#2 Fenris

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Posted 23 June 2008 - 12:40 AM

A decent start. i'll be watching this

#3 Sir_Muffonious

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Posted 23 June 2008 - 12:51 AM

I'll follow this as it progresses. It could be a good, original comic, or it could be the same as everything else out there nowadays, but I'll watch all the same. The effects could use some work, though.

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Posted 23 June 2008 - 12:54 AM

QUOTE (Johann @ Jun 23 2008, 03:45 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
A decent start. i'll be watching this

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QUOTE (Sir_Muffonious @ Jun 23 2008, 03:56 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I'll follow this as it progresses. It could be a good, original comic, or it could be the same as everything else out there nowadays, but I'll watch all the same. The effects could use some work, though.

Yeah I know about the effects... I use power point and i cant figure out a way to do a gun effect..

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#5 Strider

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Posted 23 June 2008 - 01:38 AM

wow for power point thats pretty good! so far i'd give a 8/10. i'll keep watching!!
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#6 Sir_Muffonious

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Posted 23 June 2008 - 02:22 AM

QUOTE (Flash @ Jun 23 2008, 10:59 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Yeah I know about the effects... I use power point and i cant figure out a way to do a gun effect..

I usually use the freeform tool to draw some sort of spiky...thing coming from the barrel of the gun. Then, I get rid of the line surrounding it and fill it in with yellow. Copy and paste the spiky thing, but make it white and 10%-20% transparent (somewhere in there) and place it over top of the yellow one, but make it a wee bit smaller. Then draw a straight yellow line coming from the spiky thing going through whatever the target is and off the screen. It comes out like this, for me:



Not bad, right?

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#7 Jlblue

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Posted 23 June 2008 - 03:44 AM

A solid start. I was shocked to see Javian in this. He seems to be popping up everywhere these days. tongue.gif I think the effects are passable. Good camera quality, too. Having a very mysterious start, it's hard to judge plot/ character wise, but visually it's good. So if you follow up with good action and plot, then I think that it might grow to be a good comic.

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#8 Hawk

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Posted 23 June 2008 - 04:58 AM

Pretty good for a start, but I found it odd how easy it was for Javian to hide.

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#9 Fortiest of all K's

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Posted 23 June 2008 - 05:02 PM

QUOTE (Flash @ Jun 24 2008, 12:42 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>

FACEPLANT!

Anyhow, nice comic. Good mysterious feel. One complaint is to work on effects and scenery, but thats about it.

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#10 Doctor

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Posted 23 June 2008 - 07:41 PM

good start




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