Not sure, your lines and shading seem to have improved greatly!
His feet look rather tiny in proportion to his body, while his torso seems off, unless the surcoat is just hanging funnily. So, maybe anatomy/proportions would be the thing to work on? I'm hardly an expert, but those details are what stood out to me.
The greathelm's angles and the way the knight's cloak hangs were my favorite parts. He definitely looks ready to smash some infidels, if his brother on the pachy. is nice enough to leave any for him. XD Well done!
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