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RPG: Man of Crystal


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#1 Red Viper

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Posted 01 December 2008 - 09:49 PM

Wylfgard: Man of Crystal

Character Generation; please fill out the following form.

Name-

Age-

Height-

Hair Color-

Race-

Personality-

Weapons-

Armor Type-

Here is mine if you want an example.

Name-Adam

Age-42

Height-5ft 4in

Hair Color-Black

Race-Human

Personality-Little and Happy

Weapons-A War Hammer

Armor Type-Imperial

Story

A caravan leaving the area of Illikion is attacked and destroyed by a large band of orcs. And a Imperial captain is recruiting civilians and soldiers alike to help stop them. You will have to decide whether to leave your home and fight or to stay and feel the guilt that friends may die in the battles. Your choice may yet decide the future of Illikion for who knows if they will come there next.

Rules

1-No swearing.

2-No inappropriate content.

3-No killing random people. If you do you will be banned from the rpg.

4-There is no coming back from the dead. If you die you leave the rpg.

5-The leader of the rpg will decide what actions hurt or help you.

6-What the leader says, goes.

Overview

Decide whether you want to fight or to stay in Illikion. The choice is clear, if you stay you will have little to do, but talk to plants. But if you go you can have fun fighting.

Sign-Ups close on the 9th of December.





#2 Gryphon

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Posted 02 December 2008 - 02:55 AM

QUOTE (Red Viper@ @ Dec 2 2008, 06:54 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Story

A caravan leaving the area of Illikion is attacked and destroyed by a large band of orcs. And a Imperial captain is recruiting civilians and soldiers alike to help stop them. You will have to decide whether to leave your home and fight or to stay and feel the guilt that friends may die in the battles. Your choice may yet decide the future of Illikion for who knows if they will come there next.

Decide whether you want to fight or to stay in Illikion. The choice is clear, if you stay you will have little to do, but talk to plants. But if you go you can have fun fighting.

Is that it? No larger story? Maybe, the caravan attack was a distraction?

You're not giving us much of a choice, then, if the people who choose to stay have nothing to do. Either remove the illusion of choice, or give the people who stay another story thread. Otherwise it isn't an RP, just a hack and slash with some dialogue tacked on. I say this, perhaps overly harshly, because you haven't hinted at anything other than just that, an RP version of a hack and slash dungeon, except aboveground.
-Gryph

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#3 Scorch

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Posted 02 December 2008 - 11:48 AM

I do believe Gryphon has summed it up rather accurately. This RPG seems to have.....potential.... though.
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#4 Shadow Dragonbane

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Posted 03 December 2008 - 05:21 AM

And besides what Gryphon has said, you've put a very harsh deadline on it for a board like Illikon. This isn't exactly a high traffic area of the forum, you won't get all that many sign ups in a total of seven days.

And I don't think little is a personality trait...

Edited by Shadow Dragonbane, 03 December 2008 - 05:22 AM.





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