Fascinating! I like your use of the color blue, and the concept of a Venator with a pike. The off-center picture and background were a bit distracting, as was the blurriness, but if it's a problem with your camera I can empathize.
I'm concerned that the helmet doesn't seem to match the rest of the minifig very well. Perhaps you could look at acquiring some shoulder pads to help make his bulk seem more natural? In his current state, he just looks like a Lego Castle spearman with a Star Wars Senate Commando helmet swallowing his head. There's definitely a lot more you could do, but this is a promising start!
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