Jump to content


Photo

Enomeg story.


  • Please log in to reply
136 replies to this topic

#1 Fire-fox

Fire-fox

    Daww, it's so cute!

  • Nova Member
  • 2,253 posts

Posted 20 July 2009 - 09:43 AM

This is going to be in first person, as if the person is telling the story.
Note that this story is just for fun and my enomeg is real(unless scorp wants to use).
My enomeg character is on my profile

Prolouge

My name? I dont know my name. I was given the name Ryan after the xarkonian empire discovered my warrior genes. I remember my life, though. As almost if it were yesterday.
When I was old enough to understand people and train, I was shipped away. My training I will remember, for I have to, to stay alive.
I have recorded my training on this digital diary.
DAY 1
I, Ryan, at 19 years of age am on a transport going to the training facility. I don't know where, but there seems to be only a few people coming with me. There was a big, hefty, bully boy, with brown hair, who was given the name Brendan. There was another hefty, but kind, African American kid, with Black hair, who was given the name Charlie. There was also a nice, pretty girl, with, like me, chestnut hair, given the name Katrina on board, she wasn't big or skinny, she was sort of inbetween, like me. There were a two others who kept to themselves and ignored me when I tried to talk to them.
"I wonder what it will be like." I thought aloud.
"A wimp like you probably won't survive," Brendan replied,"You're to skinny, weak, and stupid."
Brendan giggled to himself as if he thought what he said was funny. Anger boiled inside me, but I kept to myself.
"You're not a wimp," Katrina said softly, then she turned to Brendan and said,"Don't be such a bully!"
"Yeah!"Charlie said,"We're in this together, we shouldn't fight amongst ourselves!"
"Oh," Brendan said in an annoying voice,"The poor wimp can't stand up for himself, Ha!"
"Just shut-up!" I said,"I don't want to fight!"
Brendan was about to say something, but then some funny looking, pudgey, short guy with a mustache, and a red nose who looked like he hadn't showered for a months came in and said," Oi! Wha's wit' all dis' yellin? Yaa, whateva'. Ere's ya' dinna'."
He gave us trays with a sandwich, a cup of water, some carrots, a bowl of soup, and this thick green liquid that I didnt know what it was.
"Eat up!" The man said cheerily as he left our part of the transport.
After eating Charlie, Katrina, and I talked for a while.
Brendan said,"I'm gonna sleep for a while, don't you dare try anything on me or you'll get it!"
After that he went to sleep upright. Since none of us ate our bowl of green stuff I asked for them to give their bowls to me. They gave them to me with quizzacle looks on their faces. After they did I poured all of them into a bowl with a grin on my face.
'Call me a wimp will you,'I thought,'Well this will get you."
Then I crept over to where brendan was sleeping. He had drool dripping from his mouth. I opened the back part of his shirt and pored the green stuff in his shirt, and Katrina and Charlie bursted out laughing. He awoke with a start.
"WHAT THE-" he looked at me, saw the bowl in my hand, and said grudgingly,"You!"
He came towards me and cornered me, right then and there the pudgy man opened the door while Brendan tried to tackle me. I jumped out of the way right in time and he rammed into the wall and was knocked out.
"Oi!" the man said.I tried to explain, but with a toothy grin he said,"Oi, Oi, OI! Oi'm sayin' nicely andled' kid. Yer' pretty quick. Oh, and as fer' dat' big brute, just leave im' der'. Oi came in ta' say 'lights out' so lights out!"
Before we went to sleep, Katrina came over and kissed me on the cheek, I probably blushed so my face probably looked like the mans red nose.
"Nice job," she said with a giggle," You sure showed him."
When she went away I was a little dazed, but just then Charlie clapped my back so hard that I lost my breath.
"That was awesome," He said,"He won't mess with you if he's smart, so that means he'll probably mess with you!"
Charlie guffawed, and I laughed a little.
I went to sleep wondering what would happen tommorow when we get there.

Thats chapter one if you guys read comment. I'll make more. wink.gif

Posted Image


"We gotta be playin' for keeps... 'Till the life juice weeps!"


#2 Lord Boar

Lord Boar

    Semper Fi.

  • Member
  • 2,801 posts

Posted 20 July 2009 - 10:07 AM

Not bad. But correct me if I'm wrong but arent Enomegs taken in at birth? Otherwise okay story. I will keep reading it for now.

#3 Wiffleball

Wiffleball

    Special Operations

  • Nova Member
  • 4,093 posts

Posted 20 July 2009 - 10:53 AM

Methinks that Fox intended this to be a scene from one of hte many transits that Enomegs go through. From what I understood from Warrior Born is that they have several facilities that they train in before ETAB.

Anyway, Fox, this is really good stuff, I hope that you continue it, and if it turned into a book (if you got past copyrights with Scorp) then I would buy it.

--Reaver-Wolf--

#4 Fire-fox

Fire-fox

    Daww, it's so cute!

  • Nova Member
  • 2,253 posts

Posted 20 July 2009 - 12:42 PM

QUOTE (Reaver-Wolf @ Jul 20 2009, 08:58 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Methinks that Fox intended this to be a scene from one of hte many transits that Enomegs go through. From what I understood from Warrior Born is that they have several facilities that they train in before ETAB.

Anyway, Fox, this is really good stuff, I hope that you continue it, and if it turned into a book (if you got past copyrights with Scorp) then I would buy it.

--Reaver-Wolf--

Thanks. Yeah, I'm going by the knowledge I have, and yeah, they're going to another training facility.
Oh and they were taken at birth, this is just starting the diary when he's 13

Posted Image


"We gotta be playin' for keeps... 'Till the life juice weeps!"


#5 Fire-fox

Fire-fox

    Daww, it's so cute!

  • Nova Member
  • 2,253 posts

Posted 21 July 2009 - 02:12 AM

All right here is chapter 2 of the story.

Day 2,
0500-1400 hours

Well I woke up to an ugly sight of Brendan leaning over me, his bad breath on my face.
"Hey punk," he said,"I owe you a good beating, there was no way you could've knocked me out."
"You're such an idiot," I said,"You knocked yourself out by ramming into the wall!"
He grabbed my shirt and was about to punch me, but yet again I was to quick and I kicked him in the stomach, He fell to the ground coughing, but not before kicking me in the shin.
"Oi!" The pudgy man came in and said,"Wa's goin' on, eh'? Oh it' dat' big brute agai', eh'? E' neva' lurnz'. Aahh', whateva' ere's ya' breakfast."
Katrina said,"Thanks, I think."
Our trays contained a piece of toast, eggs, an apple, a cup of orange juice, and that same nasty green liquid.
"Excuse me," I asked the man,"but what's this green stuff?"
"Eh?" He asked,"Oh, dat' stuff. It' uhh, me tinks' dat' it som' sorta' dessert ting'. It taste' ok, kinda' like lemon puddin'."
"Oh," I said," ok."
We ate our breakfast, the green stuff actually tasted pretty good.
"Excuse me," said one of the other two people, which surprised me,"I'm sorry we didn't talk and introduce ourselves, but we're very shy. My name is Kypper and his name is Cooper."
"Hi," I replied,"My name's Ryan and this is Katrina and Charlie, oh and that big guy is Brendan."
Right then the pudgey man came in and said,"Oi, We' be landin' in a couple o' minutes, so get ready, k'? Good luck, yer' gonna' need it."
We landed in about ten minutes. After that we got off along with kids on other transports, all in all therer were about 100 kids my age, as we left and got in our places, about 20 other kids who were around 16 years old with strange looks on their faces left.
'Only that many?' I thought.
Katrina, Charlie, Kypper, Brendan, Cooper, and I were in the first row. We were having a role call. After everyone was there, this big, muscular man who came out and yelled,"Listen up everybody! I am your instructor! You will call me Captain or Sir, am I clear?!"
There was no answer.
He snarled and said,"I said-Am I CLEAR?!"
"Yes sir!" a hundred voices said.
"That's good," he said,"The Barracks will be co-ed."'
There were a couple of groans, and some idiots smiled.
"I will assign you to your barracks right here right now," he yelled,"Your rooms will be your group and your family from now on to the other training facilities until you become an enomeg."
There were a couple excited murmers in the crowd.
But then Captain said,"I should say if you make it to enomeg, I will warn you as other instructors have, some of you will die here in this training, whoever lives by the end will become an enomeg! Did you see that group that group leaving? Before this training around 250 arrived 3 years ago. Now I will assign you to your dorms."
There were a couple nervous murmers.
After an hour we all left for our barracks, in my barrack room was luckily charlie, katrina, and me. There were three other boys and two girls. The three boys names were named Michael, Brandon(not Brendan), and Andrew. The other two girls names were Meagan and Allison.
The room was ok, it was black stone lighted by a few lights, there were four bunk beds and one other single bed for, we were told, our group counciler. In the middle of the room there was a hologram progector. There were two doorways leading to bathrooms, one men and the other womans. There were a couple showers and stalls in the brightly lighted white bathrooms.
While we were introducing ourselves, our female group counciler came in, she was skinny and muscular, she had blonde hair and was kind of pretty.
She said," I am Amanda, and I am your group leader. I have come to assign you to all your positions on this team."
She pointed to all of us and said,"You, Charlie you're a big kid who will be the what I call Brute of the team along with Brandon, the Brutes go in heavy combat. The team programming specialist will Be Andrew and Allison, you guys will be the computer peoples who will pinpoint positions, Meagan and Michael will be Soldiers and pilots, you go into combat with a standard blaster and a light and flight vehicle. Now team leaders will be Katrina and Ryan, since you guys have shown a talent for military tactics you will lead all the missions, along with being the spies since you are light on your feat. You will get a vehicle of your choice, Silenced Duel Blazer SMG's, and Enomeg "Startalon" hand blades which you will train with the other team leaders."
I was as surprised as Katrina. Charlie snapped me out by saying,"Yeah, nice job you two I was hoping one of us would lead the team."
The other people gave us a congratulations.
Then on the Holographic progector there appeared Captain and he said,"All team leaders report to training grounds, all pilots report to hangars, all Brutes and Soldiers report to the edge of the jungle."
Well, I guess it's time to head over to training.
Diary save.

Posted Image


"We gotta be playin' for keeps... 'Till the life juice weeps!"


#6 Lord Boar

Lord Boar

    Semper Fi.

  • Member
  • 2,801 posts

Posted 21 July 2009 - 04:42 AM

Again very good I will definitely read this fan-fiction if it stays at this quality,or better. Oh, and thank you for clearing up the whole age thing. biggrin.gif smile.gif

#7 Fire-fox

Fire-fox

    Daww, it's so cute!

  • Nova Member
  • 2,253 posts

Posted 21 July 2009 - 05:00 AM

QUOTE (Lord Boar @ Jul 21 2009, 02:47 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Again very good I will definitely read this fan-fiction if it stays at this quality,or better. Oh, and thank you for clearing up the whole age thing. biggrin.gif smile.gif

Thanks, I'm most likely gonna post daily, I wanna know how scorp or wolfy think of it.

Posted Image


"We gotta be playin' for keeps... 'Till the life juice weeps!"


#8 Wiffleball

Wiffleball

    Special Operations

  • Nova Member
  • 4,093 posts

Posted 21 July 2009 - 09:38 PM

This is good, it kept the awesomeness of the first entry.

just one thing, if this is ETAB then the canidates should be 19, since that is the age when they get to ETAB.

other than that its good.

--Reaver-Wolf--

ps. do you need any other Enomeg characters?

#9 Socks

Socks

    Sergeant

  • Nova Member
  • 1,381 posts

Posted 21 July 2009 - 10:12 PM

Umm .. Reaver-Wolf .. you know we can see your name? Above your avatar?

You don't really need to inform us all who you are at the end of every post you make.

#10 Lightning Bolt

Lightning Bolt

    Federal Bureau of Interestingness

  • Nova Patron
  • 3,297 posts

Posted 22 July 2009 - 01:38 AM

QUOTE (Socks @ Jul 22 2009, 05:17 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Umm .. Reaver-Wolf .. you know we can see your name? Above your avatar?

You don't really need to inform us all who you are at the end of every post you make.

And you know, who really cares? Does it matter that much to only say that and not post about the actually story? rolleyes.gif

Anyway, the story... well, It's like everyone is an Enomeg nowadays. It's all right I guess... except that it just seems a lot like Warrior Born but seen through the eyes of a different character.

#11 MS_DOS

MS_DOS

    You're going to die anyway, so let me kill you.

  • Banned
  • 664 posts

Posted 22 July 2009 - 01:44 AM

QUOTE (Lightning Bolt @ Jul 22 2009, 04:43 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
And you know, who really cares? Does it matter that much to only say that and not post about the actually story? rolleyes.gif

Anyway, the story... well, It's like everyone is an Enomeg nowadays. It's all right I guess... except that it just seems a lot like Warrior Born but seen through the eyes of a different character.


Frankly, we care. When we're told to quit it and put it in our signature. But I ams being of the digress.

It's the same story everywhere. It comes with the universe. The best characters are the most overused. Is it just me, or is there a little too much dialogue in this?
Posted Image

#12 Fire-fox

Fire-fox

    Daww, it's so cute!

  • Nova Member
  • 2,253 posts

Posted 22 July 2009 - 04:26 AM

QUOTE (Reaver-Wolf @ Jul 22 2009, 07:43 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
This is good, it kept the awesomeness of the first entry.

just one thing, if this is ETAB then the canidates should be 19, since that is the age when they get to ETAB.
ps. do you need any other Enomeg characters?

Alright thanks,
and I'm going by my current knowledge of enomegs, I've never read Warrior Born.
Hmm, PM me your character if thats what your asking, k? I might be able to fit one or two in

Day 2,
1500-2200 Hours

When we got to training our instructor, unluckily, was Captain. At least Amanda got to go with us. But there was another downside, Brendan was also a team captain. There were around 40 kids.
"Listen up!" Captain said,"We will be going non-stop training through the whole day. First You will be tested on how well your strategic abilities are, after that all of you will gather up for training with Startalon hand blades. Those of you who are also spies will be given a practice mission. After that there will be gun accuracy tests. Lastly, after the end of the day, we will split your groups in half because there will be a capture the flag game!"
There were a few murmurs among the crowds.
"This will be no average capturue the flag!" Captain yelled,"You will rely on your past training and all you learn today, 4 team leaders on each team who will be the stratgists! There will be two spies on each team! All the rest of you will be soldiers, the Brutes will also come along with pilots and programming specialists, the team who captures the flag will be rewarded, the team who loses will go through harder training tommorrow! Am I Clear!?"
"Yes Sir!" everyone yelled.
The training was exciting, yet rigorous. Katrina and I were partners. We spent 1 hour working on strategy/war tactics, it was difficult, you had to learn your enimies weakness, the land and terrain you were fighting on, where to place different waves of warriors, and were to intercept waves of enemies etc. After that we spent about an hour on startalon hand bladeship. We had to learn various positions and counter-attacks, there was one who fainted. Captain would go around and inspect to see who excelled in it. Katrina and I were among those who did. Katrina and I were among a few others who did the spy mission, we succeded. Though we didnt prove to well in accuracy and were average in military tactics.
"Listen up!" Captain yelled,"It's time for capture the flag! We have chosen who the leaders and spies will be, after the Brutes and Pilots come we will give you half an hour to prepare. Also, be aware that you are not using light blasters, but are using real ones, people have died in this game! Good luck soldiers!"
About ten minutes later everyone arrived, for team leaders there were four kids who I didnt know named Sarah, Jake, Alex, and Bruce. For spies there was me and this skinny kid named Eric. We were given our positions, I was supposed to go on the east side and Eric on the west.
I seriously underestimated how big the field was, it was a huge jungle, complete with wild animals. Captain also said that when the whistle blows is when we start.
'No worries,' I thought,'I'm sure I can get the flag before the other team.'
Right then the whistle blew, and before I knew it I was running into the jungle. There were snakes, insects, and many other ferocious animals. I was creeping in the jungle, startalon out. I saw a kid so I snuck past, I did that with quite a few. I was walking and this kid saw me and he started shooting. If not for my training I would've been blasted to pieces, so I ran up and sliced his leg, but not before he shot me in the side.
"AAAAAHHHHRRGGG!!" we both screamed, but he was wounded worse, so I left him there and started to run, someone must've heard us.
Every time someone came I climbed onto a tree or hid until they passed. When I was on a tree I could just see the opponents flag. I walked very slowly, I could see a couple wounded bodies right by the flag. Guess who was gaurding it, Brendan. I saw Eric and he saw me, we both nodded. We went to eachother and Eric decided that he would be the one to grab the flag and I agreed.
After that I jumped out of the bush and screamed, Brendan was so startled that he dropped his gun, giving Eric the advantage. Eric grabbed the flag and started to run, but it was to late. Brendan recovered, grabbed his gun, and shot Erics leg. Eric fell down screaming, until he hit his head on a rock and was knocked unconscience. Brendan was to busy over praising himself that he didn't notice me coming up and slicing his gun in half.
"What?" He looked at me and gave me an evil grin," Yeah! I was hoping you'd come, so you blasted my gun well then lets have a dual, a startalon duel."
"Ok, I can't wait to beat you again!" I said.
Brendan screamed in anger and came at me, I barely had enough time to dodge. The battle was hard and some councilers literally came up to watch. We cut eachother minorly numerous times. Then I thought about the kid I slashed. After Brendan slashed I side-stepped and slashed him in the shin, he had a pained look on his face, then he did a stupid thing and flicked me off. So I cut his middle finger off. Now he screamed. He was so angry that I could'nt block his next move. He slashed my face, from my left brow, down my eye, and to below it. I screamed so hard, slashing everywhere. During one of the slashing frenzies Brendan got hit and fell back and was knocked unconscience. I felt so much pain in my face, but I grabbed the flag, and ran as fast as I could ignoring all the kids. As I past the line to our side , people came over to congratulated me but I fell down. Charlie helped me up and people had a look of horror on thier faces. My eye, I couldn't see out of it.
"We need a medic!" I heard Charlie scream, before I blacked out.
When I woke up I found a medic, my room except for Meagan strangely, and Amanda. I felt my face, where I touched it stung. I also had bandages on my various wounds.
"Ahh your awake," the medic said,"I'm sorry but we were unable to save your left eye."
"Are you ok?" Katrina said worriedly.
"Yeah," said Charlie,"You didn't look so great."
"I'm fine," I mumbled.
"Well," the medic said,"now that your awake you get to choose."
"Choose what?" I asked quietly.
The medic sighed and said,"Whether you want a cybernetic eye or glass eye. You can see out of your cybernetic eye, but not out of the glass eye."
I mumbled something and said hoarsely,"Cybernetic."
"Ok," the medic replied,"It will be a while so we will have to put you asleep."
Before a mask was put over my face I saw Brendan asleep with bandages on his body also. Then I fell asleep.
Diary Save

Posted Image


"We gotta be playin' for keeps... 'Till the life juice weeps!"


#13 Lord Boar

Lord Boar

    Semper Fi.

  • Member
  • 2,801 posts

Posted 22 July 2009 - 04:38 AM

jawdrop.gif I have one word fore you. AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that was even better then the last 2 were. jawdrop.gif

P.S I PM'd you my Enomeg hope he can be in your stories.

Edited by Lord Boar, 22 July 2009 - 05:21 AM.


#14 Fire-fox

Fire-fox

    Daww, it's so cute!

  • Nova Member
  • 2,253 posts

Posted 22 July 2009 - 10:08 AM

Ok peopleses I decided I couldn't wait til tommorrow so I will write another part now.
This one will be slower than the last one though

Day 3-5
Nothing to report, besides me being in bed and getting used to my eye. I'm going to wear an eyepatch outside of combat and training though. 2 kids died in capture the flag, meagan from our room and Cooper, who we met on our transport. This training is getting serious now.

Day 14
We've done the same training, except no capture the flag, capture the flag is to be once every month. When anyone sees me they stop, look, and nod. Now I know why people say if someone becomes an enomeg, they'll never be the same. I feel myself and everyone else changing. Today's training was hard as ever. It's paying off though, Katrina and I are doing better in military tactics, and this cybernetic eye of mine seems to improve my accuracy, though I most likely won't use guns very often. Some people have started relationships among themselves, Katrina and I are growing closer.

Day 22
Same training going on today, though we're looking forward to capture the flag. Another 3 people died today, 2 pilots in a crash, and one Brute. This training is getting tougher every day, I'm glad I'm still living. There are a few opponents who challenge me during training, one that is fairly well is named Dustin. Brendan seems to hate me even more every day. Charlie told me about his Brute training, he said it was tough, starting the morning with a 10 mile run, survival missions every one in a while in the jungle and stuff like that.
"Sounds tough," I commented.
"Nah," he said,"You get used to it, now it's starting to feel good.

Day 32
"Capture the flag today." I said.
"I wouldn't think you would be looking forward to it." said Charlie.
"I'm trying to put that behind me, though it has left a reminder," I said pointing to my cybernetic eye and scar.
"Well we'll still win again!" Katrina said confidently.
"Wish I shared your enthusiasm," Michael mumbled.
Then on the holoprogector Captain appeared and said,"Everyone report to your training grounds now!"
We did our regular schedule. Today's strategy test was how to attack enemies and how to find weak points, it gave me a headache to remember all that stuff. After that we went to Startalon training, I always like going there, it helps me loosen up.
Today's spy mission was easy, we had to steal plans on a holgram. Everyone completed it. Everyone was nearly bursting with anicipation by the time of gun accuracy. Katrina and I were getting better. After that, capture the flag.
'It's time.' I thought
"Listen up!" Captain screamed,"Todays capture the flag will have the same spies and team leaders. Same procedure, we will give you thirty minutes once everyone arrives! The only thing different is that this time pilots will be in Hugin fighters and will be able to shoot at the ground. Last months capture the flag winners will recieve their reward tommorrow! Good luck!"
About two minutes after he said that, everyone arrived. I was set at the east side again and Eric on the west
Then the whistle blew and I was running. Thanks to my training I crept quieter than last time. When I got near the enemy base I saw the flag, but it was gaurded by five people including Brendan.
'This'll be easy.' I thought.
There were quite a few bodies laying around the flag, among them was Eric.
'Well,' I thought, 'now or never.'
While under the cover of trees, luckily they were close by, I shot a kid in the chest, he fell back unconsience. Before they could recover I shot two more; one, luckily, was Brendan. The other two kids looked scared, but refused to abandon their posts. So I crept around with a rock in my hand. When I was close enough I threw it at the back of one kids head. It hit it's mark, the kid fell over unconscience.
'One left.' I thought.
I turned my attention to the last kid, but he wasn't there. So quickly, startalon out, I looked. I was stupid enough to turn around seeing a kid's fist coming towards my face, hitting my right cheek. I fell to the ground dazed. I pretended to be unconcience, as soon as the kid thought I was, he walked away. Quietly, I got up and got behind the kid and punched him in the back of the head, he stumbled and faced me. This is when I realized he was a brute. The kid came toward me, with an axe-like weapon and started swinging it at me. Simply by instinct, when he swung it towards the ground I rolled to the side and stabbed him in the chest. The last I saw of him was terror in his eyes and then nothing, he fell over dead. Silently I grabbed the flag and ran over to the territory line. It seems some other kid took our flag across the territory line before I did theirs, but I paid no notice I was too deep in thought.
The one thought that lingered over me was: I have killed someone.
Diary save

Posted Image


"We gotta be playin' for keeps... 'Till the life juice weeps!"


#15 Lord Boar

Lord Boar

    Semper Fi.

  • Member
  • 2,801 posts

Posted 22 July 2009 - 10:22 AM

Still getting better, and hopefully *SPOILERS* will be in next one. But, once again all I can say is jawdrop.gif

#16 Wiffleball

Wiffleball

    Special Operations

  • Nova Member
  • 4,093 posts

Posted 22 July 2009 - 10:35 AM

Wow, Fox, this ios VERY VERY VERY awesome.



#17 slater474

slater474

    Well I, I, want Fly, Fly, on the Wings, Wings of summer

  • Member
  • 827 posts

Posted 22 July 2009 - 12:08 PM

Wicked. Keep it up man.
Posted Image

#18 Fire-fox

Fire-fox

    Daww, it's so cute!

  • Nova Member
  • 2,253 posts

Posted 23 July 2009 - 02:47 AM

Thanks to all you peopleses. All right heres another part.

Day 39
All this hard training feels like I've been here for years. Everyone is starting to get better, but there has been one more death. I think this one was suicide, unfortunately. Nothing much to report today. Although Andrew, one of our team's programming specialists, has upgraded my eye. It can now zoom in and out. That's quite an advantage when it comes to accuracy. The kid Dustin has gotten better at startalon dueling, but still hasn't beaten me. I have had the thought of killing someone linger over me, but it's only made me work harder and get better.

Day 42,
0500-0700 hours

Today I woke up to the awful sound of a whistle on our holoprogector at 0500 hours.
"Wake up!" Captain screamed numerous times and then he said,"Today is a survival mission for everyone except the programmers! Programmers will go to the hangers, go to room B-6 now! Pilots report to the hangars now! Team leaders and Brutes, report to the jungle line in 2 hours! Good luck!"
"Survival mission!" I exclaimed.
"When were we supposed to be told about this and why are we starting in two hours?!" Katrina demanded.
"Woah," Amanda explained," you weren't supposed to be told, it was supposed to be a surprise, to see how well you do in teamwork and how well you paid attention in training."
"Why are we going to the hangars?" Andrew asked.
Allison said," Yeah, we usually go to the command center."
"You will be making custom weapons of your choice, also for everyone in your room." Amanda replied,"So they should be completed in two hours, then you will go to the jungle line to join your team."
"What'll I do?" Michael asked,"Will I do regular training or what?"
"You will go to the hangers and practice your regular training now, in two hours," Amanda said," you will be taken out with other pilots and be dropped seperately to where your groups are, so I recommend one of the leaders or Brutes wear a tracking device that will be linked somewhere on Michael."
Andrew started asking what weapon I wanted.
I said,"You know the Startalons?
He nodded.
"Can you make me a hand and a half sword, the blade around 46 in. out of the strongest metal you know, ok? Also make it with the starlight gas containers, but it won't use as much energy, so it will last longer. Also it would be nice to make a sheath. Can that work?"
"Well, from what I know making a sword and using starlight energy, it might not use a lot of energy, but the sword will take a little while, luckily most of the other things will take a little shorter, usually people would want a blazer sword but ok." Andrew said.
I thanked him and then he was off along with Allison and Michael
Apparently Allison was making Katrina a small gun and Brandon a small gun. Michael asked Andrew for a Visor that shoots out beams and is solar powered. Charlie asked for one like mine except a battleaxe sort of item.
After that we just started up conversation, in which I was silent, I was deep in thought.
'I have killed a boy,' I thought,'I saw the look of terror in his eyes, that could be me.'
"I'm going out for a walk" I said and left the room.
I went to the startalon training area and started training, stabbing everything in my way. I was drenched in sweat.
I fell to the ground and screamed angrily.
"Hey kid," a familiar voice said,"calm down you need to keep your energy for today."
I turned around and was startled to see Captain. I merely nodded.
"You and a few others I believe can make it to enomeg." Captain said," You along with those boys Dustin, Matt, Charlie, Michael, Brandon, and Andrew. Along with the girls Katrina, Ashley, Allison, and Leah. Kid, I heard about the boy you killed yesterday, don't linger over it, you're not the first one to kill a kid, theres that Brendan kid who I don't think has the stuff to make it to enomeg. Also the Dustin boy, he's killed two. Sorry about your eye, but you get used to cybernetic parts. Good luck kid."
I grabbed my eyepatch and put it on as he started to walk away
"Sir" I asked.
He looked at me.
"You said,'you get used to cybernetic parts'," I commented and asked,"does that mean you have a cybernetic part?"
He smiled and lifted up his right pant leg to reveal I cybernetic leg from the knee down.
"See you around kid." He said lastly.
I walked to the room, by the time I got their it was time to leave to the jungle line.
When everyone left Katrina pulled me aside and asked," You ok?"
"I'm fine." I said.
"You've been distracted," she said," I can see it, is this about the boy?"
Tears started to pour down my eye and I said,"He had a future and I destroyed it."
"It's ok,"Katrina said soothingly,"it's ok."
She hugged me and I hugged her back.
"Time to head to the jungle," I said,"don't want to be late."
We caught up to our friends.
Captain will give us instructions but heres my entry so far.
Diary save


This one is slower.

Posted Image


"We gotta be playin' for keeps... 'Till the life juice weeps!"


#19 Lord Boar

Lord Boar

    Semper Fi.

  • Member
  • 2,801 posts

Posted 23 July 2009 - 02:55 AM

WOOOOOOOOOOOOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I is in story and it was awesome!!!!!!!! jawdrop.gif jawdrop.gif jawdrop.gif jawdrop.gif

#20 Wiffleball

Wiffleball

    Special Operations

  • Nova Member
  • 4,093 posts

Posted 23 July 2009 - 04:07 AM

I like how you say my character will make it to Enomeg, this is awesomeness.

scorp.gif biggrin.gif




0 user(s) are reading this topic

0 members, 0 guests, 0 anonymous users